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She's in love
With a future cubicle
Not yet met

There's a life
Somewhere inside
She wants to forget

There's a man
Trying to break in
Failing so far

Hard to keep
sane without sleep
Counting scars

Chances come
So do people
Will luck intercede?

Probably not
Though a fine thought
We're driven to 'succeed'

Because money
conquers all
And minds kill hearts

And color fades
To somber shades
Love leaving in the dark






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On Friday December 9th, 2005, CareTaker (50) writes:
The first stanza frightened me a bit. The story line is just easy enough to follow, and leniant enough for subjective interpretation. I realy love the last stanza.


On Saturday November 26th, 2005, Broken Empty Inside (10) writes:
I like this, expecially the way it rhymes, its very easy to read. Great Job ~Josh~


On Friday November 25th, 2005, Ladislaus (38) writes:
yea nice write ~LoW-GuN~


On Friday November 25th, 2005, Fallen Angel (68) writes:
i like this poem.



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