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"The Car Ride" by stargaze0991

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Staring out the window
heading home from the city
seeing mother and Robbie in the front seat
and seeing mom finally happy
He made a heart on the window
in the condensated fog
with her and his initials
traced beautifully smog
all the hurt in the last few years
seemed all worthwhile
when i heard mom singing loudly
her hand in his and her smile
Happiness like i never felt
I saw all my troubles end
in that car ride home
I knew we'd never go back again


- thank you Robbie for making my house i home again... i don't know if i'll ever be able to repay you for what you've done for us... and mom i love you... theres no bigger praise than that






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On Wednesday December 7th, 2005, Agana (143) writes:
Im really happy for you, sweetheart. :)


On Sunday November 27th, 2005, CareTaker (50) writes:
This is quiet...like timid serenity almost. Like a breath exhaled after a long heavy stint under water.


On Saturday November 26th, 2005, Raven (37) writes:
This is a beautiful little picture of happiness. Almost a tribute, but not quite. Just... peaceful after turbulant waters.



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