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U-ne-qua Part ||

Seven-hundred-billion-seventy-seven perish
  In the sea stained red with capotilism

   Unperceived melody of the Fallen
    Falls on uncomprehensive minds
     Even as the tempest tides arise

       Raindrops riding stagnant winds
        Sting their eyes as chaos descends
         But spoonfed lies (brainwash disguised)...
          Even the epitomes of ignorance that notice
           Something is amiss just turn off their minds
            Turn on their TV's and ask:

             "What's Mr.Bush have to say about this?"

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On Thursday December 15th, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:

and this is just a personal belief but I don't think people should attack bush without a positiion backing them, nad i don't feel that here. but I really loved the way it sounded, and I think if you changed people believing the media to the horrors of wa

On Friday December 16th, 2005, TaintedButterfly (176) writes:

I just read it again Joseph... still as great as the first time I read it!! Always stick to what you believe in, no matter who opposes it! Julia~

On Thursday December 15th, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:

I really like your use of sounds, I ♥ aliteration. I think though that this coudn't be shortened and gain clarity, while scarificing only a little bit of power. alot of that though is just cliche's like an attack upon capitolism, and lies-brainwah.

On Sunday December 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (24) writes:

Awesome use of rhyme, subtle yet bursting with power. Great poetry. +R+

On Tuesday December 6th, 2005, swallowedbythevoid (52) writes:

a student of revelation perhaps? very very nice. my fave absolutely so far.

On Tuesday December 6th, 2005, TaintedButterfly (176) writes:

All I can think to do is *APPLAUD* Stunning & masterful Joseph!

On Sunday December 4th, 2005, The Fool (4) writes:

Turn on the TV - a scene in fear and loathing - gunfire - warfare - dead children. This speaks to me in volumes - in fractals and horror imagery...crawling through my headspace like a goddamn machine gun rattle in my brain...fantastic piece...

On Wednesday November 30th, 2005, manywalks (18) writes:

Tsk, shame the Shrub is incognito on 42nd Street at the moment.

On Wednesday November 30th, 2005, Dusty Strawberry (82) writes:

I love this..Its great! Dusty~

On Wednesday November 30th, 2005, cucuio (7) writes:

woah...I honestly don't know what else to say beyond, woah...

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