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Staccato

When we watch
days turn to weeks
turn to moments

and each minute lingers
on soft-spoken lips,

Every syllable
becomes a forcast raindrop,
warming the ice age;

I'd sooner drown in this downpour
than ever dry.

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On Tuesday December 5th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (176) writes:

Dunno how I missed this one, but wow Rhi, it is absolutely breathtaking! Julia~

On Thursday October 19th, 2006, suicideseason (112) writes:

This holds so much more meaning,now. So soon. So very soon. I love you,M'Lady.

On Sunday October 1st, 2006, Dusty Strawberry (82) writes:

Oh I like this alot.

On Friday August 25th, 2006, Mirrored Symphony (13) writes:

I've missed reading you're works, reading this puts happiness in my heart, and etches love into my soul. ~Gothic

On Wednesday August 23rd, 2006, An Expired Member (4) writes:

rhi..your art is always stunning to me. i've missed reading you. love ya. ~bethany

On Friday August 18th, 2006, suicideseason (112) writes:

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