Poetly -|- suicideseason -|- is tomorrow a pool worth wading in?

is tomorrow a pool worth wading in?

was it all really so beauitiful
or did the drugs taint our vision
did the stars really collide
or did a '91 monte carlo
just back fire
did anything ever mean anything
was nothing everything
was today as wasteful as
yesterday was
is tomorrow an option
or is it mandatory
did your eyes really hold me
or was it the drugs
holding your eye
holding me
is love a momentary position
or a drug induced flash flood
did you think of me
as you fucked me
or was i his surrogate
did you want me
as you took me
or would you
have taken
anything?

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On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, delegnat (12) writes:

perfect. simply perfect. wow is right.

On Sunday March 16th, 2008, MGood (7) writes:

sometimes i wonder... and it hurts.~M

On Monday December 26th, 2005, Tasya (44) writes:

This piece is dripping wet with thought. If tomorrow wasn't worth wading in, then what would be the alternative? This is an amazing piece. ~T

On Wednesday December 14th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (51) writes:

damn, I was so cheerful a moment ago..now I'm lost in thought about your words

On Tuesday December 13th, 2005, Fallen Angel (68) writes:

hmmm i dont know what to say. it is a lovely poem. but i want to say something else. but i can't

On Tuesday December 13th, 2005, Raven (37) writes:

Hindsight... sometimes it doesn't matter what really happened, especially when our perspective is happier than reality. This got progressively sharper as the lines went on... where the intro held my hand, the ending stabbed out my heart. . .

On Tuesday December 13th, 2005, Raven (37) writes:

Tomorrow is a pool worth swimming in.

On Tuesday December 13th, 2005, TaintedButterfly (177) writes:

Wow, you never cease to amaze!

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