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"Rhi" by suicideseason

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If the smile
broke my face
i would never fix it.






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On Thursday May 31st, 2007, An Expired Member (41) writes:
oh so your say if smiling made your face wrinkle you would smile just as much cause you take pride in your happy marks... ok that what i think this means.. HAHA i could be wrong -En!GM@


On Saturday May 5th, 2007, An Expired Member (10) writes:
JEDI


On Thursday April 12th, 2007, An Expired Member (10) writes:
but what does the title mean?


On Wednesday August 23rd, 2006, An Expired Member (4) writes:
awwww! :)


On Thursday July 20th, 2006, Circe (11) writes:
the sheer depth of simplicity, breath-taking.


On Sunday December 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (24) writes:
These words are like a mystical well of meaning, with even the smallest sip there are profound meanings to behold. An undescribable feeling from this. +R+


On Thursday December 8th, 2005, CareTaker (50) writes:
Awwww...thats so sweet. Is it meant to be? Like pure sincerity...devoted.


On Monday December 5th, 2005, TaintedButterfly (177) writes:
Seems to me, he would happily smile forever... :) Awesome write!


On Saturday December 3rd, 2005, Fallen Angel (68) writes:
this is a cute little poem.


On Saturday December 3rd, 2005, Raven (37) writes:
Perhaps, if you took the time to read into this, you may have noticed that this piece is just a little more than 'cute'. There is more to commenting than leaving five ambiguous words in your wake.


On Monday December 5th, 2005, blue (32) writes:
hmmm.. a little grouchy today are we?? lol.. crazy canucks! =)


On Monday November 28th, 2005, blue (32) writes:
what the hell is a rhi?


On Sunday November 27th, 2005, Jedi_MindFuck (23) writes:
this little piece goes deeper than i think you may have intended...though i could be wrong (and probably am). i honestly don't get people that refuse to allow 11 words the attention they deserve..


On Sunday November 27th, 2005, Jedi_MindFuck (23) writes:
...we search for epics of adjectives and adverbs; utter bullshit that says so much and yet means so little. i don't give a good goddamn about thor.


On Sunday November 27th, 2005, Raven (37) writes:
If all it took was black death antelope... then... damn. I should have tried that earlier. :P.... You fucking rock.



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