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Whispering your name
I seek your darkend face
Please save me from this place
I am being pulled down
By negative glares
And silence from the night

I called you up to save my soul
I just needed to hear your voice
Your comfort ways and peace of mind
How could I believe your only my

I pushed away the sands of time
The pieces of my sharpend mind
The pain barred inside my thought
Of utter lies and desapointments rage

Why am I losing my way
In the bounty of these words
I cant take the lies
Hiding in the beauty of your eyes


~writeres note~
This was a really messed up poem but if you know my writing this is just emotional and fully charged with a broken heart, I hope for the most part that you enjoyed.






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On Saturday May 26th, 2007, An Expired Member (41) writes:
Its emotional all right i was cringing to every word


On Thursday March 2nd, 2006, CareTaker (50) writes:
I don't think it's messed up.


On Wednesday March 1st, 2006, Alec Pure (24) writes:
this was nice good job i liked the similies used ~~Pure~~


On Monday February 27th, 2006, foresakenangel (38) writes:
very nice.


On Monday February 27th, 2006, Agana (143) writes:
So so beautiful... I absolutely loved every word.



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