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"Last Words, (because I deleted it the first time :( )" by Dusty Strawberry

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This is good bye.
This isn’t what I wanted
When I first said hi
Cant you see I am sick
Cant you see I am tried
I nolonger wanna try
To play the game
I am never going to win
Lifes to short
Your to aregant
To ever truly love me
Cant you see my pain
Cant you see my side
All I ever did was love you
When all you did
Was make me cry.
So this is good bye
To what was never there
And in that good bye
I leave you
All my fears








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On Thursday April 6th, 2006, An Expired Member (3) writes:
life sucks and then you die? No way! be a rebel! Live!and live well! Fight the system and love, and be loved.


On Thursday April 6th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (176) writes:
Beautiful, yet sad. Job well done Dusty. Julia~


On Wednesday April 5th, 2006, stargaze0991 (58) writes:
again if you didn't read my comment before(smoothe moove btw:P) i really love this work, one of my favorites by you so far, i'm glad that you decided to stick to a simple structures, it lets my mind drift... great work, STar



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