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A New Messiah

she wants to be a messiah
without the crucifixion
she wants to fuck delilah
without samson's intervention
she wants to be a deity and rule us everyday
and punish the wars of your rich gods and the martyrs that they slay
she wants to see galaxies
all the planets and the stars
she wants to be a fallen angel without the swollen scars

she wants to free the kingdom
be worshipped by the earth
she wants to be the prophet
for ten times what shes worth
she wants to break free from eve
and leave them all behind
to be born again in the thrill of sin
and revive her dying mind
she wants to stand
raid the king
slaughter the guards and kill everything
burn the world and let her soul be free
light the noble of eternity

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On Thursday January 26th, 2006, Darkness (7) writes:

very nice concept grasp, and very well portrayed!

On Thursday December 15th, 2005, Fallen Angel (68) writes:

this was origionally suposed to be a song but i changed my mind in the end.

On Thursday December 15th, 2005, Ladislaus (38) writes:

This is some cool shit right here Good Job!

On Wednesday December 14th, 2005, suicideseason (112) writes:

She wants to rule the earth...but she is totally unwilling to pay the price...to bleed...to sacrifice...her resolve is in question...She needs to dig deeper within herself...world conquest is no small feat...

On Wednesday December 14th, 2005, suicideseason (112) writes:

...And if you're not willing to die for your vision...you're not living your vision.Self-sacrifice is millions of miles away from self.-t

On Wednesday December 14th, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:

buetifull...it also discribes a buetiful mind of great imagenation... I love it

On Wednesday December 14th, 2005, Agana (143) writes:

A poem overflowing with raw imagination. Yet another awesome write, angel.

On Wednesday December 14th, 2005, TaintedButterfly (176) writes:

"she wants to be the prophet for ten times what shes worth" Great line... but I would think she is priceless! ;) Awesome piece. Julia~

On Wednesday December 14th, 2005, An Expired Member (13) writes:

that's an awesome poem. well written, good ideas!

On Tuesday December 13th, 2005, Dusty Strawberry (82) writes:

Interesting...Interesting. Nice write. Dusty~

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