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A NEW DAWN (the fantasy)


Many suns have journeyed across my sky

Rising, falling then leaving this dark life

Now they are only stars in my interstellar night

Their brightness mocking the distance and remembered light



I recall each of their days as if they were yesterday

With much of their shine hidden by their clouds and mine

But now, on my skyline, I see a new sun arising

She is climbing slowly, cautiously, above my horizon



She is shining so brilliantly, should I run for shelter

Will she illuminate my deepest, darkest corners

Will she accept whatever truths she uncovers

Will she see parts of me, I have never discovered



Should I look away or stare at her until I'm blind

Should I pray that no eclipse divides me from her light

Will her radiance fade the pain of ancient stars

Will she set or stay to warm my twilight heart



For I believe she may be

The morning of my creation

I believe she may be

The sunrise of my brightest day

I believe she may be

The moment of my realization

I believe she may be

The dawning of my life



©1998 by steve giacomini





‘EVENING’ (the reality)



It is evening once again

One more sun has fallen from my sky

Another day has come to an end

One more tear to my eye



It is evening once again

Azure giving way to blackened gray

I can feel the cold setting in

I am older by one more day



Billions of suns surround me

Yet in my sky there is gloom

I don't need the multitudes

There's only one to turn it to blue



People tell me the world is turning

They say there will be another day

If there is, well, I don't care

My heart is caught in yesterday



With this mind I have wandered

Through the hopefulness of dreams

With these eyes I now wonder

At my midnight reality



Oh twilight, take me with you

Wherever it is you dwell

Don't tease me with promised light

I can't take another sunset hell



It is evening once again

One more sun has fallen from my sky

I believe this is the end

One last day has said Good-Bye



It is evening once again

The sun, now only a memory

I hate this thing called love

As the light, it's always leaving me



So many hours of darkness

Lay before this fading life

So few moments of illumination

Welcome to the edge of eternal night. . .



©1998 by steve giacomini
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On Sunday September 24th, 2006, Tasya (44) writes:
It's like being air hovering over your shoulder absorbing every passing day beside you with your beautiful description of this scene. Captured very well I must say. ~T



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