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"In The Mirror" by JiNx

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Staring in the mirror
The face I see is not my own
As I look closer
She looks so alone
Her eyes filled with pain
As I look in to her soul
Her childhood was not vain
She has no control
Her eyes have become so cold
She holds a secret no one knows
As she stares back she seems to grow old
Her lips as red as a rose
They seem to quiver
Her face tells a story
Of a girl lost in her past forever
She has no glory
Forever to be lonely
She's filled with such dismay
Thinking if only, if only...
As she slowly fades away






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On Wednesday December 7th, 2005, swallowedbythevoid (52) writes:
alone even when she is not? that's how i can relate to this. very nice cadence, very well written. i love it... *faves* *~`void`~*


On Monday November 28th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (51) writes:
This is something I can just completely relate to... Such sorrow dancing through every line.. Nicely Done. :)


On Sunday November 27th, 2005, Fallen Angel (68) writes:
i like it. and it had rhyming word to it. keep it up!



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