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There are times when I see myself standing over a corpse
On a summer night, with the rain hitting my face, the wind
Blowing through my thigh-long hair, and the lightning going off in the distance.
I’m covered in blood,
Some is mine, but most of it is the corpse’s.
I’m exhausted, for the fight lasted an hour
An hour of intense fighting on this warm, damp night,
And I won because I used the two blades that I have always carried with me,
Now soaked in blood, dripping the red fluid into a pool at my feet.
I’m standing in a cesspool of blood, mud, and guts,
Because the person wouldn’t go down without a fight.
I decide to drink of the blood, because I want it, because I crave its exquisite taste.
After having my fill, with blood on my lips, flowing down my bare chest,
I’ll depart to find another, or even myself
(The inner demons have control of me)
That kill was just the beginning of my training,
Training to be an assassin,
One whom everyone will know and fear by name,
Because everyone fears the Darkness, and what it harbors.






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On Monday December 19th, 2005, Ladislaus (38) writes:
This rocks man and the structure is different whitch makes it easy to read


On Monday December 19th, 2005, Ladislaus (38) writes:
good job on this


On Wednesday December 7th, 2005, Agana (143) writes:
"And I won because I used the two blades that I have always carried with me," The blade doesn't make the man, darkness. Man makes the blade. Although I do understand where you're coming from. This is an excellent poem.


On Friday December 2nd, 2005, GothicRocker (11) writes:
Oh damm. this is kick ass. I cant tell if i'm still alive- I feel like the corpse from your poem. This knocked the life out of me. Bravo. *claps hands*



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