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"Sleepless Nights" by foresakenangel

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Its 4 am and I am just throwing something together. Please tell me what you think. I will probably tweak it some later.

Days and nights begin to meld together
Days go by and I still haven’t slept
1
   2
      3
         4
Close your eyes my child
Try to sleep
Maybe a lullaby to aid you
Can’t sleep
You’re on my mind
Its been months and you are still there
Questions are still unanswered
The reason for no sleep
Why do I miss you
Why do I blame myself
Why do I let your
Immaturity
   Stupidity
      Carelessness
          Selfishness
Still haunt me
Still torment me
I am losing sleep over you
You don’t care
You only care about yourself
We could be lovers
We could
We were
You fucked up

Good bye
I’m going to sleep
You are not worth it
You never were
I am over you










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On Wednesday December 28th, 2005, Fallen Angel (68) writes:
it does have alot of potential. and it is a little depressing. i think it will make a awesome poem when you do tweak it up a little. nice work so far. ~angel~


On Wednesday December 28th, 2005, Ladislaus (38) writes:
Very depressing I give you that...it has lots of potential... I cant wait till I get to read it when it gets tweaked up a bit



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