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What you were

You were, perfect, beautiful, and always nice
Now you’re a bitch, a witch, and cold as ice

You were an inspiration, a dream, and my reason to live
Now you’re a fear, a cry and my reason to die

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I loved you but I can’t any more

Comments on What you were

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On Sunday December 4th, 2005, Fallen Angel (68) writes:

i agree with both of them in this poem. i like it though

On Friday December 2nd, 2005, The Crimson Queen (51) writes:

Absolutely amazing work.

On Thursday December 1st, 2005, Agana (143) writes:

Each word creeps eerily & slowly, like an abused spider with two legs.

On Thursday December 1st, 2005, SparklesSunshine (5) writes:

Nice. Very impressive. This flowed beautifully.

On Thursday December 1st, 2005, TaintedButterfly (176) writes:

wow... both touching and sad. Beautiful...

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