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| Work | Comment | Date |
|---|---|---|
| stone age bestiality | HAR HAR HAR!!! I like...made me grin! - CareTaker | 2006-11-27 01:35:13 |
| Today | Beautiful... - CareTaker | 2006-10-31 02:39:26 |
| Something to be proud of? | You'd be suprised. - CareTaker | 2006-10-27 13:23:37 |
| ivy | This is probably in my top ten of your favorite poems. You used rhyme with a reserve that was effective...more then effect grammar however...the points were made with depth and pungant logical twists. You've unraveled confusion beautifully. I love this. - CareTaker | 2006-05-05 01:15:58 |
| Something so Beautiful, Something so fake | I don't think it's messed up. - CareTaker | 2006-03-02 23:18:03 |
| Searching For The Sun | You've highlighted the important difference here. It's a nice short and simple peice to wake us up...if we need or can be. I like :) - CareTaker | 2006-02-07 13:30:55 |
| Untitled | This is the first style of poem I ever made! That said, it is one of my favorites...however I can never pull it off so well as you have. I've found a pearl of wisdom in this. This poem makes me feel a little less alone...which is irony isn't it. - CareTaker | 2006-02-07 13:26:01 |
| ~{'v'}~ | I'm beyond my self, and see more in this, this time around. Nicely done. - CareTaker | 2006-01-10 00:23:52 |
| A Lullabye For Armageddon | oooo...aaaa....I realy love this. I've never read a poem from you in this style...and it is very, very beautiful. And daunting, this leads you giving you choice the whole while. - CareTaker | 2005-12-14 21:04:37 |
| The fall of a Soilder {the tears of the family} | Ooooo....I do like this. Your writing is so amazing anymore. Everything fits and flows so well. And yes, I agree...this did trigger hatred for our political puppet. - CareTaker | 2005-12-11 02:21:07 |
| In The Dark | The first stanza frightened me a bit. The story line is just easy enough to follow, and leniant enough for subjective interpretation. I realy love the last stanza. - CareTaker | 2005-12-09 20:46:27 |
| Geek | I like this. It's so true and many different aspects, different types of people. Although, I'm still mulling over the last line... - CareTaker | 2005-12-09 19:59:30 |
| Writer's Block | Ha! I was actualy expecting a poem. lol. - CareTaker | 2005-12-09 19:57:59 |
| Hermit | This inspired a grin...maybe a smirk. Struck me as slightly comical at any rate. Sounded so serious in the beginning and then the second line of the third stanza just set the tone...and yet it's sad in a weird way. - CareTaker | 2005-12-09 19:56:24 |
| Only For Awhile | This is gorgeous. Absolutely beautiful. Could easily get lost in this...it's so sincere and just...gorgeous. - CareTaker | 2005-12-09 19:53:12 |
| Tall He Stands | For some reason "Histrionic Personality Disorder" popped into my head after reading this. Lol. A good lesson in putting up face that doesn't come close to the truth. - CareTaker | 2005-12-09 19:48:29 |
| Wind's Flower | No happy ending...just gut twisting reality. I realy like this. You spared detail and luster, simply telling this story with clarity and and depth. So sad, but yeah...I agree with the other two. - CareTaker | 2005-12-09 19:44:29 |
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